3 Star
Patrick Laycal was working as a dishwasher when the Royals
decide to eat there. Patrick’s boss
ropes him into cooking the foods for them and then fires him. He finds a job almost immediately cooking for
some elites. He keeps coming home to
Princess Jessica in his house. He feeds
her and she keeps coming back. When food
poisoning sweeps through Dallas, Patrick tracks down what is causing it to keep
Jessica safe. Jessica is determined to
piss off all the members of congress by not being a baby factory to give them
the male heir they want. She wants
Patrick and she will have him.
This is marked as book one but it came out well after the series
was established and is a prequel. I very
much wanted to love this story as I love Jessica and Pat in Null and Void. However, as I’ve said with other books by
Susan Copperfield there are so many scenes that can be cut out and have a more
cohesive and better book. I don’t know
if the author doesn’t want to cut or people are just being yes men to her but
she needs to edit her books. You don’t
need to have every minute detail left in the book to have a good book. You have to have a book that makes sense
throughout. I liked seeing how Jessica
and Pat got together but it seemed like the only reason they get together was
because he cooks for her and it would horrify her parents. There didn’t seem like any other
connection. If you cut out all the
drivel it was nice to see what lead to their marriage.
Book 1 A Royal States
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