Thursday, February 23, 2023

Party Girl by Rory Miles

 



2 Star

Whitney is about to be forced into a mating she doesn’t want. She decides to have one more hurrah before she won’t be able to enjoy life when the party is raided. She ends up arrested. The arresting cop takes pity on her and takes her home since she has nowhere to go. The problem now is they feel connected but the cop and his pack have their own secret and the rest of them aren’t sure they want to keep her. Will they find their HEA?

This book had so much potential, but it just fell flat to me. There were too many inconsistencies in the story. One such issue is with Whitney and her granny. She inherited things from her but at one-point states she destroyed everything she got but later talks about selling everything. Which was it. Another issue was how did Whitney’s mom find her? Her BFF knew she left but not where she had gone but somehow her mom found her. It was hard to believe. I also had a hard time matching the character development. She was so abused and beat down with a lot of triggers but so feisty and willing to hook up with guys it was like whiplash.

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