Wednesday, December 13, 2023

Deal Breaker by Melissa McClone



2 Stars

Dashiell likes things to stay the same. He’s happy with his life this way. To help his friend Iris, he hired her as his house keeper and she’s been doing it for years. To a point she feels he no longer sees her. She finds another job and gives her notice. Dashiell doesn’t think she’s serious until the new staff arrives. With her gone he realizes that she was more than a friend and wants to keep her forever but when he reverts back to bad behavior will she forgive him?

This read like someone very young wrote it. The dialogue was very juvenile and immature. There wasn’t any development of anyone. Dashiell doesn’t grow or change and is very selfish. Iris is bad as well. She lets herself be taken advantage of and doesn’t stand up for herself. When she sort of stands up for herself, he disappears for a couple of months. He pops back up and is all contrite. He shows no proof that he’s changed at all, and she just forgives him. No thank you!

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